Recently, we did a group meeting review of each of our film openings. In my group I tried my best at giving out as much tips and suggestions to my group. The people that were in my group were Antonio, Nadia, Giulia, and Andreina. I told Antonio to think about color scheme, and to think about a better title name than the shapeshifter. I thought that the shapeshifter gave away what the story was about too easily. I told Nadia that she should pitch in more of her authentic ideas to her group because she doesn't feel very in control about the storyline at all. I didn't really know what to say to Andreina and Giulia to help them out. The idea that they gave me was for my title name. Antonio said that the name could be Betrayed since my main character's parents get betrayed by the government. I don't think we'll end up using this suggestion because the plot doesn't really focus on the fact that his parents got betrayed. The story is supposed to focus on the downfall of the government because of the main character. So, Alec and I don't really think it'll fit well with the plot.
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