Day 10

 Screenplay

Alec designed a screenplay on Celtx but the link wasn't working for me for some reason, but I'll still link it down here just in case. 

https://www.celtx.com/auth/public/resource/irqf5xy6

Here are pictures just in case it doesn't work.

I think the script is pretty cool, I really like the speech. The formality of it captures what the speaker should most definitely speak like. It was exactly as I imagined. I think it'll work perfectly for the beginning of our film opening. I also really like the flinch that Ciel does at the mention of his father. It simulates the trauma and history that he has between the government and his father. When I was reading through the script I was imagining how they would sound like in my head and to me they each speak a little formally in their on way. Which is good, since they are people who are in the military. It mirrors the respect that I usually see in military movies between soldiers and their superiors. I especially like the beginning of the script after the speech. The part where Ciel silently and solemnly goes about his mornings contrasts with him happily greeting people down the street. I feel like that really brings out a big aspect of his character, which is that he's basically broken on the inside. It simulates how he hasn't been normal since the incident between his family and the government. I really love the script! It captures what Alec and I wanted it to be.